Could someone critique my poem?

I actually totally understand your poem... and I think the way you were feeling when you wrote it contributed to the great sense of emotion and depth that the poem had. For only 15, you did a great job. Your lines were short and to the point but somehow still contributed to a nice flow when reading the poem. Sometimes the best times to write a poem is when your feeling a particular way... it just brings out more meaning and creativity to the topic of the poem on which your trying to write. Good job, and thanks for answering my question!